Todays writing paragraph is 'location 1': Your character hunts in the first location but doesnt find the animal. I have attached the example from the book and you can see at the top of the flip chart paper, my original sentence. The class improved my sentences so they weren’t so boring! You need to include your characters name (whether that was you or a friend), how they travelled through the forest, how they hid behind the tree and what they found instead of your animal. Remember to include capital letters, full stops, commas between adjectives, alliteration and an ellipsis like the one in the example.