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Read and enjoy the example text below (you will need a grown up to help you). It is a version of the story that has been written to help us see how a story is laid out and how we can change a story to make our own.


Today we are going to have a look at the sentence we wrote yesterday and how we can make this better. Have you used any adjectives? Could you perhaps use the word 'and' to link ideas together.




The toy is soft.

The big, brown teddy bear has soft and cuddly fur.